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Shubham Upman's avatar

The first two lines are such a great start for the poem. I enjoyed it. It is well-written.

Cal's avatar

Thank you so much sire!

Nia's avatar

This is soo gooodddd!💗

Cal's avatar

Thank you <3

dhruvi's avatar

how did you manage to assemble words in such a pretty way?

Cal's avatar

I try, thank you 😭😭😭

royal's avatar

Something about this touches home a little too close

Cal's avatar

Thank you for reading Lan Wangji 🙏

Terene's avatar

BEAUTIFUL… absolutely love this

Cal's avatar

Thank you so much 😭

kajal's avatar

This is so beautiful and amazing. I love poems about yearnings

Cal's avatar

THANK YOU

anthony's avatar

love love love!!

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Thank you <3

Saddhana Velpari's avatar

so beautiful

Cal's avatar

Thank you!!!!!

Apoorvaa S Raghavan's avatar

What devastates me here isn’t what’s remembered, but what never got the chance to exist. This poem understands that love often doesn’t break from violence or betrayal, but from silence and timing, from not knowing each other in the everyday ways that make a future imaginable. Excellent writing!

Cal's avatar

Exactly you get it! Thank you so much <3

Charlotte's avatar

This is so beautifully devastating wtf

Cal's avatar

Haha thank you 😭😭

Tanisha's avatar

Hi Cal, i am not sure iif you're the same Cal, I used to talk on Instagram 3 years back.. If it's really you, you used to call me Tanishaaa. Do you remember?

Cal's avatar

Yes yes it's the same Cal, but you'll have to brush up my memory 😭😭😭

Amavasya (inactive)'s avatar

pretty words are not suppose to hurt so bad ahh

Cal's avatar

Hehehehehehehehe

kissofgreenonyourneck's avatar

"To your memory my pen still slaves". This line. I'm stealing it cause it's so good and...deep😭 absolutely hit on my entire motive to write.

Rakhi Kumari's avatar

Such heartwarming poem,as if it's written by a close one 💖

varada ⭐️'s avatar

what a privilege to have known a love that still hurts so much.

The Emo Unicorn's avatar

Had to google what moot meant but it was so worth it